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Post by Orangey Popsicle on Mar 8, 2022 12:48:25 GMT
If anybody has any feedback about my story, please put it here! I wanted a space where people can talk about it without creating an issue of trying to new chapters in the thread when they come out.
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Post by Vulture on Mar 8, 2022 13:47:14 GMT
SICK!!!
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Post by Vulture on Mar 13, 2022 19:48:17 GMT
Man...Red is like a crockpot waiting to boil over. Anyway, woohoo more content!
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Post by BETELGEUSE on Mar 13, 2022 20:14:09 GMT
i thought it was good!!!! sorry i don't have much to say about it, i'm still digesting it.... lol
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Post by Vulture on Mar 13, 2022 22:26:53 GMT
Man...Red is like a crockpot waiting to boil over. Anyway, woohoo more content! Purple is a Manic Pixie dream nightmare to work with. |
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Post by BETELGEUSE on Mar 13, 2022 23:38:46 GMT
i thought it was good!!!! sorry i don't have much to say about it, i'm still digesting it.... lol OoooOOooOOoHhhhHhhHHhhHHh it was good!!! i read it three times bc i have ADHD. thank you for the delicious, delicious meal. Red and Purple both seem like absolute nightmares and i LOVE IT. |
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Post by Vulture on Mar 14, 2022 12:41:34 GMT
i thought it was good!!!! sorry i don't have much to say about it, i'm still digesting it.... lol OoooOOooOOoHhhhHhhHHhhHHh it was good!!! i read it three times bc i have ADHD. thank you for the delicious, delicious meal. Red and Purple both seem like absolute nightmares and i LOVE IT. WORST BOYS. NO EMPLOYEE OF THE MONTH FOR YOU |
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Post by Orangey Popsicle on Mar 14, 2022 16:16:52 GMT
i thought it was good!!!! sorry i don't have much to say about it, i'm still digesting it.... lol OoooOOooOOoHhhhHhhHHhhHHh it was good!!! i read it three times bc i have ADHD. thank you for the delicious, delicious meal. Red and Purple both seem like absolute nightmares and i LOVE IT. Aww thanks! I wanted to be as close to canon as I could get when putting them in this scenario. I hope I did well lol It might not entirely be the ADHD because I crammed so many details in those two chapters. I annotated the original document extensively to pre-plan a bunch of foreshadowing. I noticed that Tallest Red was more likely to take on the role as leader while Tallest Purple seems to only like the status of the role, so I used it to be the start to their conflict of egos. Red tries to recover his bruised self-esteem from the Florpus Incident, but Purple will continue to slack off and leave him to the heavy lifting without realizing. In short, the paperwork isn't the issue and they both need to work their own individual shit out. |
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